Stories


Hi jammers! Here's my new story

Chapter 1:
Feast Trouble


It was almost Thanksgiving, I had to make a feast, I would invite my friends over to share it with me.
I hopped over to the oven so i could make the feast.

I took the blue flower

and the green icing,

I put them both in a bowl

Then i put it in the oven and waited


I took it out

And put it with the rest of my feast
I called my friends, but each had something they were doing...
sooo
I decided to eat the food all by myself
I could barely eat any more
But i did, and i finished my feast

I went upstairs of my treehouse to take a rest
i was getting on my couch

But it broke and i fell behind and went to sleep

Some thanksgiving, this might happen to you!


Chapter 2:
Phantom Invasion!

One day I was talking to my pufferfish, who had the ability to breath out of water.
Suddenly, out of no where, five Phantoms came! I was terrified!

Then The ground started shaking.
"What's happening?!" I shouted. 

more phantoms came out of nowhere, and circled me and Puffer The PufferFish!
PufferFish got scared, and blew itself up to try to defend itself!
Light from above shined down on us, and my feet was no longer touching the ground!

Chapter 3:
Saved by a knight in shining armor

I was taken to this... you'd think they could do a bit better...
I wandered around there strangely floor colored floor, and noticed the same meteorite that they put in my den!
Then a door broke open and in came a lion roaring fiercely!
She came in and saved me!
She took me back to my den on her own little space ship
When we got back, more phantoms came!
She roared again!
The phantoms got scared of her fierce teeth and tried to run away!
She roared and roared!
She had done it!
I gave her my thanks


I let her stay in my house and we had fun. Her name was Shadow!

Thanks to ShadowChaser4 for being the lion!

19 comments:

  1. Welcome i'll help anyt time because i like to help you out!

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  2. i like the stories there pretty cool. i like the first one expeshally.. the feast, the cooking, the eating, the couch braking, its all really cool glad you thought bout makin it its real nice... the alien one is cool 2, and yes i think they could make their space ship better!
    ~dolphino

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  3. Your Amazing dolphina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Hope to help you out with the rest of the chapters!!!!
    Let me know when ya want me!!!!!

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  4. Wait is shadowchaser4 and duststar the same person?

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    1. Yes

      Duststar changed her user to ShadoChaser4

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  5. You just had a little speeling mistake on the user name it's ShadowChaser4.
    And I won't be on for quite some time because i broke my femur. ='(

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    1. Aw I'm sorry about that! Hope you get better soon

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    2. It might take awile because it's the second strongest bone in your body and takes the longest to heal,But.....I will still come on AJ now and then.
      I haven't seen you in awile on AJ so ya I hope to see you soon =D

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  6. Hi there im tootyfafa. You can tell me when you need me to make a story. its best to tell me before august 17 because thats when my membership expires.

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    1. I DELETED MY OWN COMMENT XD

      ~BUNNYLOVEFOREVER123

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  8. RabbitLoveForeverJune 16, 2012 at 12:27 PM

    I love your stories.

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  9. I like the stories. I have a request for a story: Write about a little bunny that just wants to be a Rock Star but everyone says she is too small and not brave enough and in the end she becomes a Rock Legend!! I also have a blog myself: www.ajfoxmessenger.blogspot.com
    FIND ME ON ANIMAL JAM!
    I am:
    FloraPrettyPet13

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    1. That sounds like an awesome story! :) I'll be sure to do it! Want to help?

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    2. Maybe I could help you right a bunch of your stories. And Dolphina, if you go to my blog and click "P.T.P" at the top, you inspired me to right my own story!!

      FloraPrettyPet13

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  10. Sure I would love to but how could I help you dolphina? And by the way thanks for adding me!

    -FloraPrettyPet13

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  11. Yeah, but how do I help, Dolphina!?!?

    ~FloraPrettyPet13

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